Unearthed: My First Story

September 22, 2006 @ 6:57 am | Filed under:

While going through boxes in the basement, I found my baby book. My mother had tucked this piece of paper inside:

bigicecreamstory

I don’t know how old I was, but I had to have been pretty young. (Mom, do  you remember?)

If you click to enlarge, you can just barely make out that: 1) I had yet to master the lower-case a; 2) the spelling of the word “cousin” had me completely flummoxed; and 3) my understanding of story structure has come a long way. “Look! Look! A bird nest. We will have to take care of it. If we don’t it will die.” “OK. Let’s go to the store and buy a big Ice-Cream.” “OK. A big big big one!”

So much for the poor little bird. But, I mean, come on! Ice cream!

At the bottom of the page, my mom wrote: “She wrote this story completely by herself. Maybe we have a budding author on our hands.”

Aw, Mom! Sniffle…


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    Karen E. says:

    How cute (and prophetic!) 🙂

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    Murray says:

    Your Mom thinks you were about five. Any chance there might be a sequel to that story? (…a chapter book, perhaps!)

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    Julie says:

    Is that the cutest thing or what?

    My mom did the same for me and I have my first story which is about kittens who are lost and found almost immediately (nothing like a missing narrative arc to show off writing talent at an early age, huh?). I spent a great amount of time thinking of clever names for those kitties though. 🙂

    Loved the peek at your handwriting, spelling and punctuation. There is nothing like real evidence of misspellings to remind you that none of us were born super spellers.

    Julie

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    Jennifer says:

    Aaaww…I bet your little ones loved seeing this bit of Mommy History.

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    Alice says:

    I love it, and you know what else I love? The handwriting reminds me of Jane’s writing when she was little. You ought to make a comparison. The s and a’s in particular.